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Corrected Essay: Some people think that art is an essential subject for children at school while others think it is a waste of time.
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Essay Correction: Many feel that happiness is mainly an individual responsibility while for others they are external factors
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Prevention is better than cure (Corrected essay)
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Feedback of Ramanand Swami From India: the results of a survey about people’s coffee and tea buying and drinking habit
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